AA Inter 3

Qiu by qiuyuqiuyu
February 18, 2017, 10:01 pm
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Thanks for the text Qiu.

Your interest in the betawi is clear on the text. A few things to consider:
– what from their culture are you interesting in? If is language how is that being used in any way to help think the project?
– from the text we get very little understanding of their past and present condition. Like Theo pint above how could you explain what interest you in them from their past and present?
– the design scope of using train parts is interesting but come around more of a situational consequence than a great potential to connect either with a aspect of their culture of as a solution base for some of their problems. For example how train parts help them connect to those culture? Is it the material, it’s form, it’s connotation of mobility, or simply as a material scrap? Elaborate that relationship as it is very mute now in the text.
– the archipelago idea is ok, nothing essential yet, but if it is helpful for you, I need to see how in plan and section your project concept diagram dialogues with the city context (it connect by height/colour, morphology or disconnect from it?, how?).

Both diagram ric site section and plan are very important to explain and actually explore some of the ideas of the text in a more direct way.

Push it it hard for Tuesday, as those questions and drawings need to be set before the crit.
Good luck!

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