AA Inter 3


Jae_Glodok by jaewvkim
February 19, 2017, 5:25 pm
Filed under: 2016-17

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Hi,

The text feels like a short introduction to what is a interesting idea. But there is very little attempt to either explain what it is or could be or elaborate more about its potential design scope. Instead the text mainly talks about what it does not want to be (specially at the end).

Please try to catch up and be a lot more descriptive about both the project scope and design scope apart from the political set up of the project context. Specificity and intention is paramount here.

Where is your site, what scale are the interventions? What are they specifically? What are their intentions? To connect with locals? Image of the city? Press?
Work on that and drawings for Tuesday.
Without that the crit may be only vaguely useful.

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