AA Inter 3


Proposal Diagram by Elizabeth Hardie
February 19, 2017, 12:46 am
Filed under: 2016-17, Elizabeth

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Thanks for the diagram, it would be good to:

1- Loose the faded borders, make it more clearer, more 3d (it feels very loose, without the proper connection of parts to whole. here is a good example to work on it:

2- do one more diagramtic with words (still being more 3d too axo like). example:
https://www.google.co.uk/search?q=oma+diagram+words&sa=X&rlz=1C5CHFA_enGB621GB621&espv=2&biw=1288&bih=776&tbm=isch&imgil=xGJgTBRH_F1NNM%253A%253BpUXej557x5YjJM%253Bhttps%25253A%25252F%25252Fwww.pinterest.com%25252Fykshin%25252Farchitecture-diagram%25252F&source=iu&pf=m&fir=xGJgTBRH_F1NNM%253A%252CpUXej557x5YjJM%252C_&usg=__aQg9wk94–c5TF1gmwNNJmL2ne8%3D&ved=0ahUKEwixoaGckZzSAhWCJMAKHbDJCjwQyjcIKQ&ei=8IupWLHpBYLJgAawk6vgAw#imgrc=xGJgTBRH_F1NNM:

Content wise is telling what you want but it is not showing it, as the diagram is a blurred. Carry on, look forward to see more!

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